COMPUTER EFFECTS
Our lifes easier when computer entered in our life.Computer affect many different ways in our life.This all effects in our lives is possitive.I belive that there are three important effect.It provide communication with other people, spend nice leisure and easy get information.
First of all, computer influence communication among people. Before, people communicated only phone with each other.This way is expensive and not enough.Thanks to computer, a lot of newness occured in people life.For example, msn,facebook,twitter...ect.They provide to communicate face to face.Therefore, people chat with each other cheaper.
The second effect is spend nice leisure.People are interested in computer when they are bored.They are listen to music.Therefore,they are cheerful.They are watch films.Also.they are play computer games.People surf on the internet.Thanks to those, people increase the value of their time.
Last but more important effect is easy get information.Thans to Internet, people get information which be necessary.For example,information of their friends, online homework,daily needs.Students profit internet for do homework.
Everybody agrees that computer affects in people life. Nowadays,computer is easier communicate among people.It provide spend nice time.Thanks to it, we are easy get information. To sum up, computer suffer from positive ways in home or other place.
It's a good essay :)
YanıtlaSilThere are a few wrongs, which are vocabulary and simple grammer of writing. But this essay better than my essays :D
The most important point is your title, "Computer Effects". It's pretty bad addiction, for example me =) But, like you said computer has many benefits for us.
Thanks for essay, a good example for us.
I think your essay good.But may be you explain a lot of knowledges and give a lot of example.
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